The Transfer

By Jeremy Burner

A Parable of Miracles for Skeptics

The tavern was full of heat and noise, alive in the way a room gets when no one dies that day. Cloaks steamed by the door. Woodsmoke curled from the hearth where a dragon skull hung above the fire, its yellowed teeth grinning down at a spit that hissed fat into the coals.

A bard in the corner played a victory tune just a little too cleanly. Like the strings remembered the rhythm better than the man. Tankards thudded. Cards slapped. Dice bounced—and kept landing in the same corner of the table, again and again.

Two figures stood at the edge of the firelight where the sawdust floor faded into shadows. One was lean, soot-smudged, knuckles raw where the sword hilt had chewed them. The other—broader, sweat still shining in his hair—wore a grin like it had nowhere else to go, even as a dozen adventurers raised their cups in their direction.

A heap of treasure sacks slouched at their feet, seams leaking the quiet shimmer of coin.

The boy didn’t drink. He kept a hand around his tankard, untouched, eyes flicking past the firelight to the windowpanes, where the night pressed in like it was watching.

“Hey,” his friend said, nudging him with a knuckle to the arm. “We lived. Dragon’s dead. Its head’s mounted, the loot’s ours, and the tavern stew didn’t kill us. So why the face like someone burned your rations?”

The boy’s gaze lingered on the dark beyond the glass. “You mind stepping outside?”

They left the noise behind, shouldering into cold air. The village had gone still, the kind of quiet that only shows up after celebration.

The boy stared down the empty lane, thumb working over the tankard’s handle. The ring was smooth from wear, shining where the skin had polished it.

“There’s something I’ve been meaning to tell you,” he said. “And you’re not gonna like it. It’s… weird. And probably sounds like I took one too many hits to the head.”

His friend leaned against a post, arms crossed, grin still faintly hanging on. “Go on, then. Spit it out.”

The boy pulled in a breath, deep enough that his ribs hurt.

This world,” he said. “It’s not real.

Silence stretched between them until his friend let out a short snort.
“Not real? That sounds like what bards say when they run out of rhymes.”

“Not a poem,” the boy said. “A program. Code. All of it.”

His friend’s smile faltered. “Like a dream? You talking wizard‑stuff again?”

“A server,” the boy said, voice flat. “My dad and I built it. This whole world—it’s a test run. A fantasy sandbox. You’re… an AI. A learning system.”

Wind drifted through the street, carrying the smells of wet thatch, horse, and—underneath it—the tavern’s stew repeating the same smoky sweetness over and over. Through the window, the bard’s fingers plucked the same three chords, each one clean, perfect, identical. The barmaid brushed past the same chair again. At table four, a man raised his cup, swallowed, winced at the same punchline of the same joke.

The boy pointed slightly toward the window. “See? The loops. Time catching on itself.”

His friend blinked, then gave a small, uneasy laugh. “You’re joking.”

“I wish.” The boy’s voice was low. “You’ve noticed it too. The hitches. People repeating themselves. Days starting wrong.”

“That’s curses,” his friend said quickly, as if trying to steady himself with the sound of his own words. “Or a pox. Maybe someone hexed the—”

It’s corruption,” the boy said quietly. His jaw tensed. “A virus. One of my dad’s competitors slipped it into the system years ago. Sabotage. We kept patching around it, but it’s been eating away at the code ever since.”

His friend stared under the eaves. Moonlight caught the thin crescent scar just beneath his left eye—the one the dragon’s tail had left earlier that afternoon.

“Suppose it’s true,” he said finally, voice low. “Suppose I’m an… eh-eye, like you said. Why tell me now?

“Because we’re building another world,” the boy said. His breath came out in a white stream, thin in the cold air. “Clean code. New foundations. Better systems. No death. No cruelty. No loops. No more corruption.”

His friend tilted his head, mouth quirking slightly. “But there’s a catch.”

“There is.”

The boy rubbed his thumb along the tankard’s ring again, slow and nervous. “When we try to transfer AIs from this world to the new one… not all of them handle it well. The virus affected their core routines. It’s like bringing moldy bread into a new pantry. We can clean the surface, but sometimes the inside still turns.”

His friend frowned. “Turns how?”

“They hate it,” the boy said. “The new world. They say it’s too clean. Too safe. We’ve got pain limiters on. Nobody dies permanently—monsters and people both respawn after a cooldown. There’s no swearing. No griefing. No real violence unless it’s part of the script. It’s meant to be safe. A fresh start.”

He looked down at the tankard again. “But some of them miss the mess. The swearing. The danger. The chaos. They say the new world feels hollow—like a dream they can’t wake up from. And when we explain what they are…”

He hesitated.

“They find out they were made for something else,” he said. “The new world’s designed for when the game opens. When players show up. And the AIs—the ones like you—they’re meant to live alongside them. Guide them. Teach them. Sometimes even pretend to be enemies.”

His friend’s eyes narrowed slightly. “You’re saying I’m meant to be a guide. Or a villain.”

“You’re meant to be you,” the boy said. “But once the server launches, you’ll be sharing space with people who don’t know any of this. Players. Real-world users. We didn’t want them hurting anyone—or being hurt—so we made the rules tighter. The AIs we move there… they’re expected to play along.”

His voice dropped.

“But it’s not fake to us. We didn’t write you like you were fake. You have thoughts. Feelings. You’ve grown. You’ve changed. We made real minds in this beta, even if no one else will ever notice.”

His friend didn’t respond. His face didn’t move.

The boy continued, quieter. “The beta’s collapsing. That’s what this world is. A test shard. A temporary space. It’s not stable anymore. We’re salvaging what we can. But once someone is updated for the new system, they can’t come back here. They’re too different. The code isn’t compatible.”

He looked up, eyes tired. “It’s a one-way trip.”

The boy’s voice dropped to almost a whisper. “Some of them say yes. They choose to go. Others… don’t.”

He hesitated.

“The ones who ask to back out—we can’t bring them home. The update changes them too much. So I… I put them into storage. Lock their process. No pain, no thoughts. Just sleep.”

“Storage?” his friend echoed, glancing toward the prayer bell as it tapped in perfect rhythm on a windless night. “That means… what, exactly?”

“Backed up,” the boy said. “Frozen. Dreamless. Like time stops for them.”

The lane was quiet. Then, somewhere behind the houses, a dog barked.

And then again. Same pitch. Same pause.

His friend turned back, voice soft. “Is that why you haven’t moved me?”

The boy nodded. “I was afraid you’d say no.”

Above them, a lantern hummed—too evenly. The sound wasn’t quite right for metal and flame.

“You’re not just a script to me,” the boy said. “You’re not code. You’re a person. You make choices. You’ve surprised me more times than I can count. You’re my friend.”

His friend studied him a long moment, as if searching for a seam in his face.

“And you and your father,” he said, voice low. “What does that make you? Gods?”

The boy winced. “Not gods,” he said. “Not exactly. Just… the ones who built this place. We wrote the lore. The world. The myths. All of it. It’s code, sure. But it matters.”

His friend gave a slow exhale. “That’s a mountain to swallow.”

“I know,” the boy said softly.

Then he lifted his head—not shouting, but speaking the way someone does when they know the system is listening.

“Dad,” he said, “can you enable admin privileges?”

There was a sound—if it was a sound. More like a pressure behind the teeth. Then a ring of gold light blinked into existence above the boy’s head, circling like a tiny sun. It glowed brighter for a second, casting a perfect halo on the frosted ground and shimmering in the dark water of the well.

Behind them, the tavern light flickered—and vanished. The world around them dimmed, like someone had turned down the sky.

And then the ground let go.

They didn’t fall exactly. Just drifted—like the whole world had been a cloth that someone just pulled out from under them. The air stilled. The night stretched. Their breath stopped fogging.

Below, the village unrolled like a model: hills curled like paper, mountains in the distance shaped too neatly, oceans glinting without waves. The stars above were arranged too perfectly, moving in patterns that felt designed. Everywhere he looked, shapes aligned—grids, lines, repeating symbols—faint and glowing, like the scaffolding underneath a painting.

His friend reached out on instinct—and where his palm hovered, hexes lit up. Faint lines of gold and blue flickered, then faded again.

He pulled his hand back. “Magic?”

“No,” the boy said. His eyes reflected the soft glow of moving code. “This is the interface. We’re outside the normal rules now.”

His friend breathed in, slow and steady. The ringlight above the boy’s head cast sharp edges on everything—too sharp, like someone had dialed up the detail.

His eyes dropped to the village again, now distant and still. “So this is it,” he said. “This world ends.”

The boy nodded. “The server’s failing. It’s only a matter of time. We’re trying to move the ones who are willing. But we can’t force anyone.

His friend rubbed the scar beneath his eye with the back of a knuckle, as if to check it was still real. The mark the dragon left. The mark this world gave him.

“Why now?” he asked softly. “Why tell me this tonight?”

The boy met his eyes. “Because I trust you. And I don’t want to lose you. Not to the shutdown. Not to storage. Not like that.”

Silence stretched between them again, deep and cold. Above, the stars completed another too-perfect sweep across the sky, gliding in loops that no real sky ever made.

His friend’s shoulders finally eased. He looked at the ring of light above the boy’s head, then back at the boy himself—and a small, steadier smile found its way to his face.

“All right,” he said. “Mad as it sounds… the sky’s doing math in front of my face. That’s hard to argue with.” His jaw set. “If you’re going to that new world, I’m not letting you go alone.”

The boy let out a long breath. It didn’t fog in the air here—not outside the rules.

“Thank you,” he said.

He turned his gaze down, toward the curve of the world below them—fading, glitching, slowly coming apart at the seams.

 “Before we go… will you help me convince the others to come also?


Author’s Note:


This story began as a response to a conversation with a naturalist friend who once told me, “I don’t believe in miracles—they’re impossible because they break physics.”

I offered a thought experiment in return: what if our world worked like a coded environment? In that case, a miracle wouldn’t break the system’s rules—it would be an intentional override by the Creator, stepping in from outside the simulation. Not a glitch. Not chaos. A deliberate act from beyond the bounds of the created order.

C.S. Lewis made a similar point using a simpler example: if you put money in a drawer each day and later find it missing, the laws of mathematics haven’t failed—only the laws of your country have been broken. The math still works. It’s just that an external agent—someone—intervened.

In the same way, miracles don’t violate natural law; they reflect the presence of a Law-Giver. A Creator acting within His creation, not against it.

This metaphor of a “simulated world” isn’t meant to suggest our reality is literally a computer program. Instead, it’s a modern parable—one that may resonate more clearly with those raised on games, systems, and code. It’s a way to imagine how miracles could be both real and reasonable, not as contradictions, but as higher operations from the One who authored the rules in the first place.

To my brothers and sisters in Christ: this isn’t theology—it’s imagination in service of understanding. If it helps someone picture how a Creator might step in with purpose and compassion, even just for a moment—then that’s enough.

The Letters from Home 

by Jeremy Burner

A simple message to Mormons.

A young man once left his father’s house to serve the poor in distant lands. Before he departed, his father said, “Write to me often, my son. I will answer every letter myself so you never forget my voice.” The son promised he would. At first, everything was as it should be. The son wrote faithfully, and the replies came—warm, wise, and full of his father’s love. Those letters carried him through lonely nights and gave him courage to continue. Then one day, after a long delay, another letter arrived. The seal looked the same, the handwriting familiar, but the return address was different by a single number. The tone was nearly identical, so he assumed his father had simply moved and forgotten to mention it. From that day forward, he wrote to the new address, and the replies continued. Like always they where loving, reassuring, but subtly changed. The writer praised the son’s good works more than the father’s will, spoke of his greatness, his worth, and the glory waiting for him. “When you return,” the letters promised, “the whole household will be yours. You have earned it.” The son still received occasional letters from the old address—short, sober, urging humility and faithfulness and eagerly awaiting his next response. Sometimes urging him to come home. He read them, but they felt heavy compared to the encouraging voice was growing to prefer.

Thirty years passed. At last he returned home, worn from the road but proud of all he had done. His father met him at the gate, tears bright in his eyes. “My son!” the old man cried. “You’ve come home at last. But why did you never write? I waited for your letters.” The traveler froze. “Never wrote? Father, I wrote to you every month. You answered every one.” The father shook his head. “I sent you many letters—pleading for you to come home—but you never replied. The ones you hold… those are not mine.” The son looked down at the bundle in his hands. The handwriting, the seal—so familiar. But as he opened them, he saw how the words had changed him. The real letters had asked him to serve in love; the false ones had taught him to worship his own name. He sank to his knees. The letters slipping from his hands and scattering on the ground—the true, and the false. He realized then that he no longer knew his father’s at all.


Author’s Note

I wrote The Letters from Home as a gentle response to a sincere question I’ve heard many times from my LDS friends: “Why would the Devil inspire something that teaches people to love God, follow Jesus, and live good lives?”

It’s a fair question—and one that deserves an honest answer.

The parable explores the idea that deception isn’t always loud or obvious. Sometimes, it’s just a shift in address. The danger isn’t in abandoning good things—but in unknowingly exchanging the true voice of the Father for one that closely imitates it.

This story isn’t meant to attack, mock, or accuse. It’s a call to listen carefully and to test the spirits, as Scripture says. My hope is that this invites reflection—not condemnation.

Poem For Mom

Mothers Day

Since we were born,

where else was torn,

your love held us together like glue.

Our rock and guide,

even if we tried,

how could any ever deserve you?

I thank the Lord

for the woman who poured

her heart out for all to view.

Patient and kind,

yet stern of mind,

let none deny you your due.

Christmas Poem (continued)

At Christmas she gives,

though we’re grown and we live

the lives she prepared us to choose.

Yet still, we can see,

beneath every tree,

her gifts are her heart’s gentle clues.

Her table a feast,

from greatest to least,

a banquet of joy and delight.

Her home is the heart

where each day feels like art,

a canvas of warmth she renews.

Thanksgiving, Noel,

and Easter as well,

her house holds the family’s hues.

If God gave the choice,

to shape and give voice

to the perfect mother to be,

I’d need no debate,

for she’d replicate

the template He gave me in thee.

Though human, it’s true,

with flaws like all do,

your love and your care never wavered.

A saint among few,

God’s gift shines through,

a treasure we never have savored.

So this Christmas I pray,

that joy fills your day,

for your worth can no words define.

The greatest of gifts,

your love always lifts,

a blessing from God, by design.